The redesign is fine, but I would put a face a little more voluminous and plump and add some kind of scar to make it look more rough and imposing, but hey it's just my tastes hehe greetings.
I like the story, it is interesting I hope to see more content soon, 1 recommendation for it to have a greater visual impact is to redesign the werewolf character, just that, greetings
Absolutely I love the story, the plot, the mystery, I wish there was a route for Rex with the idea of getting to know him more and somehow calm the internal pain he has.